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« on: January 05, 2010, 12:37:36 AM »

The king gallops

Shaking free from the shadow,
Beating the armor,
Kicking about the bones,
Slurping the flesh and blood,
The creaking increases.
Smashing the heart

He walks in alone
Toward the faraway other side.



The poem can be read as Grimmjow's life story. "Breaking free from the shadow" could be evolving from a Gillian, and the next three lines his time as an Adjucha. "Smashing the heart" could be his empathy (or, rather, his lack thereof), though it could also be his fracción given he's alone in the next line. The last line might mean he's heading for the other side of the battle, the path to his throne, or just that it'll be a long time until we see him again.
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« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2010, 04:36:10 PM »

Wow! This is very deep and connected with his life as you pointed out in the different lines.

Great job!~
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« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2010, 07:55:07 PM »

Short, but quite descriptive of my favourite espada! Nice job
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« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2010, 06:22:49 PM »

Thanks for your comments Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2010, 05:21:14 AM »

It's not bad at all!  Grin
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« Reply #5 on: January 09, 2010, 08:04:39 AM »

I wonder what an Aizen poem would look like.
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« Reply #6 on: January 23, 2010, 06:15:13 AM »

I wonder what an Aizen poem would look like.


Like this:

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the lord my soul to eat
If I cry before I wake
I pray you lord my soul to take

If Aizen-sama wants my Soul
I beg you lord to let me know
Open my chest and let me free
If Aizen-sama want that be

If Hollows piece that frightening scream
I pray the lord will let me dream
If Aizen-sama wills my death
I beg you lord release my breath

Tell me lord, Aizen-sama's Will
Tell me what will make him still
If Aizen-sama makes me bleed
I beg you lord Ignore my pleas

Oh lord before this night is through
Let Aizen-sama send me to you
Let me beg and grovel, plea and cry
If it's Aizen-samas will that I die

The only thing I beg you lord
Is as he strikes me with that sword
You show the joy upon my face
At Aizen-sama's chosen fate

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« Reply #7 on: January 23, 2010, 08:37:56 AM »

Pretty kool poem did'nt there was an Aizen poem
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